Uh, hold on. Are these wording fixes that are coming now, when the
design in in place. Wasn't the process that was set up supposed to deal
with this on an earlier stage?
For me, it's OK, since you'll do the adjustments yourself. I just want
to stress that the process exist for a reason.
- Andreas
On 09/25/2015 06:44 AM, Jeff Fortin Tam wrote:
Alright, here is my big list of nitpicks. If there are no objections I
could fix them tomorrow or this week-end.
Also, I'd like to retroactively correct the previous year report's
date to reduce confusion.
Page 1
- Correct my name for photo attribution
- Add/correct credits for coordinators, proofreading, design?
Page 3
- "whose names can be found on the next page" << "whose names can be
seen at the beginning of this document"
- depending on available space: restore paragraph breaks, adjust
paragraphs spacing [low priority]
- fix the bulleted list & indents/alignment [low priority]
4
- /"Here are some glimpses into what we have achieved in 2013-14."/ >>
I suppose we do mean "2014-15" for hackfests?
- /"Builder, the IDE specific made for GNOME development,"/ >> Not
sure about "specific"; "specifically"?
10
- /"Became clear to Board that"/ >> "Became clear to the Board that"
- Should "Pam" be replaced by "Pamela" (full length) everywhere?
11
- 2nd paragraph: /"to the situation at hand as they could in order
to"/ >> add a comma after "could", or remove "at hand"?
- 3rd paragraph: "Family" is capitalized, is that intentional?
12
- 3rd paragraph: "Keynotes" is capitalized, is that normal?
- technically, it's "elementary OS" instead of "Elementary OS", but it
would look weird in the middle of a sentence where all the other names
are capitalized... thoughts?
13
- "All three keynotes were very given to packed rooms and rousing
applause." >> "very given"..?
- 5th paragraph: "gstreamer" -> "GStreamer", "gpg" -> "GPG"
16
- 3rd paragraph, /"more reliab predictably",/ I suppose I should take
out the "reliab"
17
- update the Collabora logo
- I believe SFLC was no longer listed on the foundation pages in 2014
- Year should be 2014, not 2013
18-20
- Add styling for the headings
- Fix the missing special character for "Micha" Bartoszkiewicz (again)
Hopefully that's all that's left? Besides figuring out if we can
afford bespoke cover artwork this year :)
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