On Thu, 3 Jan 2013 17:55:21 +0900
Carsten Haitzler (The Rasterman) <ras...@rasterman.com> wrote:
> On Thu, 22 Nov 2012 02:05:00 +0400 Igor Murzov <e-m...@date.by> said:
>
> this is all fixed by now - but i think an extra , in one place could have been
> good - i added it in. :)
"As a bi-product of this" and "as a result" in one sentence also looks like a
bug:
As a bi-product of this, Enlightenment will
connect to enlightenment.org and transmit
some information as a result
I'll suggest dropping "as a result" part.
-- Igor
> > ---
> > src/modules/wizard/page_170.c | 14 +++++++-------
> > 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/src/modules/wizard/page_170.c b/src/modules/wizard/page_170.c
> > index 7ae75b1..fe42877 100644
> > --- a/src/modules/wizard/page_170.c
> > +++ b/src/modules/wizard/page_170.c
> > @@ -31,18 +31,18 @@ wizard_page_show(E_Wizard_Page *pg)
> > e_widget_textblock_markup_set
> > (ob,
> > _("Enlightenment can check for new<br>"
> > - "versions, updates, securiity and<br>"
> > - "bugfixes, as well as available add-ons.<br>"
> > + "versions, updates, security and<br>"
> > + "bug fixes, as well as available add-ons.<br>"
> > "<br>"
> > "This is very useful, because it lets you<br>"
> > - "you know about available bug fixes and<br>"
> > + "know about available bug fixes and<br>"
> > "security fixes when they happen. As a<br>"
> > "bi-product of this, Enlightenment will<br>"
> > "connect to enlightenment.org and transmit<br>"
> > - "some information as a result much like any<br>"
> > - "web browser might do. No personal information<br>"
> > - "such as username, password or any personal<br>"
> > - "files will be transmitted. If you do not like<br>"
> > + "some information much like any web browser<br>"
> > + "might do. No personal information such as<br>"
> > + "username, password or any personal files<br>"
> > + "will be transmitted. If you do not like<br>"
> > "this, please disable this below. It is highly<br>"
> > "advised that you do not disable this as it<br>"
> > "may leave you vulnerable or having to live<br>"
> > --
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