Thanks Jason, nice work!

A few comments:

- It's not obvious what's going on when the block of wood turns into
two. Even expecting the multiple outcomes, one does not intuitively
expect a beam of light to move a block of wood. I don't mind the
exaggeration but I suggest you make it explicit in the text and
indicate displacement in the figure somehow;

- Numbering figures would be a great improvement;

- You should sign your work!

Best,
Telmo.

On Sun, Nov 10, 2013 at 10:49 AM, Jason Resch <jasonre...@gmail.com> wrote:
> All,
>
> I've put together a primer on QM, as I think in the process of explaining
> something in simple terms can help improve one's understanding of a given
> subject.  I thought I would share it with this list in case it might help
> anyone else. I also welcome any feedback anyone has to offer regarding it.
>
> Jason
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