Doug Baily wrote:

> For example, "the auxiliary data bus is 16 bits wide".

Or another way: "It features an 16-bit auxiliary data bus".

>
True enough.  But if the subject of interest is the auxiliary bus rather than 
the "it" that features the auxiliary bus, I'd argue that the bus deserves to be 
the subject of the sentence.  Keeping the topic in the subject rather than the 
predicate makes for more powerful, active writing.

-FR
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