Mr. Tantan/Abhay,
Sabse pahle Salaam Arz hai aapko,
Now to start with about my poems, shayris, songs etc............. I do understand the Poem ~Pyaar~ is not upto its standard in grammar & I too found it very Absurd while drafting it!
I thank you so much for taking so much of time & patience to go thru' it & show me my mistakes. Thanks indeed Janaab.
That shows how interestingly some of you care to spend time on my mails. Im smiling now. I will keep your points & tips in mind in future.
Secondlly about my Songs that I post from films etc:
Well, I never have been posting such songs which I find lovable or like sharing with you guys in GB, for a long time. I remember the same Loudness was created when I had posted the Poem from Umrao Jaan Film.
I never do write the name of the films from which I take the song becoz I expect my readers that they are very well acquainted by them! (like you do).
Yaar, about the Aankhein film song, believe me, I also didnt know from which film the song had been taken, it was only when one of our GB friends enlightened me about it!
& b t way, I didnt listen the Aankein song on radio. In Saudi arabia its History if we can hear Hindi film songs or infact any other languages rather than Arabic, on the local radio.
I do afford a Casetter player & listen the songs which I have a few audio casettes or CDs.
So, I think now you can understand how many times I must have stopped, rewinded etc the songs that I like & write them down!
Anyways, I am so happy to know that you take so much interest in going thru' my mails (by heart).
Please do keep writing about them as always.
Thanks & loads of ................................
Cheers dude,
Hope you got a good companion while your journey back to Bangalore in the flight.
Keep up the Spirit!!
regards,
Sahil.
Tintin India <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Tintin India <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Saahil,
No doubt, ki Shaayari Karna ek bahot achchhi cheez hai.
But, uske pahle, hum jis language me Shaayari kar rahe ho, us language ki
Grammar and vocabulary seekh lein to achchha rahta hai...
Otherwise it looks like ROSHESH (of SARABHAI v/s SARABHAI fame) writing the
poems, or should I say Roshesh trying to play with words, just to rhyme.
Because CHEEZ is a feminine word, so would be ANOKHEE, not ANOKHA (and
finally would not rhyme with DHOKA).
Another thing, When you scribe the SONG from a MOVIE or some ALBUM, Pls you
also ADHERE to the policy you ADVISED to Mr JIMMY.
Which means, dont FORGET that, guys on the list have some GK of HINDI
movies, and will find where did you took the song (or so called SHAAYARI)
from.
For Ex.: The other day you scribed the full song of AANKHEIN (DHARMENDRA -
MALA SINHA starred) (Milti hai Zindagi me Mohabbat Kabhi Kabhi...). And
point to be noted, you did not bother to acknowledge where the song came
from. On the other day, when someone from the group told about same, that
time you accepted (or were forced to accept) that you took it from Radio (I
still not able to digest, that one can write down the song, at the speed it
is played, because on Radio you dont have replay button).
Later, you advised JIMMY to adhere to the policy to give credits to the
actual writers.
That Moment, when I read that mail from you, I laughed a lot, and said to
myself "Look who is talking too".
Last but not to least, Pls Pls Pls, when you put SHAAYARI in your mails,
Pls Pls Pls Mention the word POEM / SHAAYARI in SUBJECT itself. It would be
ease for many of us, while navigating thru the GB / G_B mails.
Thanks and Lots of Regards,
Abhay.
===================================On 9/19/05, ~Sahil~ <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Ye Pyaar Cheez Hai Bada Hi Anokha,
Aksar Lagta Hai Ye Ek Ajeeb Saa Dhoka!
Is Pyaar Mein Log Hote Hain Paagal, Jaise Jalte Suraj Ke Saamne Ghir Jaate Hain Baadal!
Kahte Hain Pyaar Hota Hai Andhaa, Kyuki Dil Ko Nahi Hoti Hai Aankhein!
Jab Hoti Hai Mann Mein Pyaar Ke Deedar Ki Aas Tab Nahi Hoti Hai Aankein Dil Ke Paas!
Pyaar Naa Jaane Oonch-neech, Jaat-paat, Ho Jaata Hai Ye Kabhi Bhi Kisi Ke Saath!
Pyaar To Hai Bahut Hi Nirala, Kabhi Kabhi Anjaane Mein Kar Jaata Hai Apno Ka Mooh Kala!
Pyaar Karna To Hai Janmo-janam Ka Sidhhaanth, Bahot Kum Hote Hain, Jo Nibhaate Hai Isey, Maran-o-paraanth!!
*~ S a h i l ~
No doubt, ki Shaayari Karna ek bahot achchhi cheez hai.
But, uske pahle, hum jis language me Shaayari kar rahe ho, us language ki
Grammar and vocabulary seekh lein to achchha rahta hai...
Otherwise it looks like ROSHESH (of SARABHAI v/s SARABHAI fame) writing the
poems, or should I say Roshesh trying to play with words, just to rhyme.
Because CHEEZ is a feminine word, so would be ANOKHEE, not ANOKHA (and
finally would not rhyme with DHOKA).
Another thing, When you scribe the SONG from a MOVIE or some ALBUM, Pls you
also ADHERE to the policy you ADVISED to Mr JIMMY.
Which means, dont FORGET that, guys on the list have some GK of HINDI
movies, and will find where did you took the song (or so called SHAAYARI)
from.
For Ex.: The other day you scribed the full song of AANKHEIN (DHARMENDRA -
MALA SINHA starred) (Milti hai Zindagi me Mohabbat Kabhi Kabhi...). And
point to be noted, you did not bother to acknowledge where the song came
from. On the other day, when someone from the group told about same, that
time you accepted (or were forced to accept) that you took it from Radio (I
still not able to digest, that one can write down the song, at the speed it
is played, because on Radio you dont have replay button).
Later, you advised JIMMY to adhere to the policy to give credits to the
actual writers.
That Moment, when I read that mail from you, I laughed a lot, and said to
myself "Look who is talking too".
Last but not to least, Pls Pls Pls, when you put SHAAYARI in your mails,
Pls Pls Pls Mention the word POEM / SHAAYARI in SUBJECT itself. It would be
ease for many of us, while navigating thru the GB / G_B mails.
Thanks and Lots of Regards,
Abhay.
===================================On 9/19/05, ~Sahil~ <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Ye Pyaar Cheez Hai Bada Hi Anokha,
Aksar Lagta Hai Ye Ek Ajeeb Saa Dhoka!
Is Pyaar Mein Log Hote Hain Paagal, Jaise Jalte Suraj Ke Saamne Ghir Jaate Hain Baadal!
Kahte Hain Pyaar Hota Hai Andhaa, Kyuki Dil Ko Nahi Hoti Hai Aankhein!
Jab Hoti Hai Mann Mein Pyaar Ke Deedar Ki Aas Tab Nahi Hoti Hai Aankein Dil Ke Paas!
Pyaar Naa Jaane Oonch-neech, Jaat-paat, Ho Jaata Hai Ye Kabhi Bhi Kisi Ke Saath!
Pyaar To Hai Bahut Hi Nirala, Kabhi Kabhi Anjaane Mein Kar Jaata Hai Apno Ka Mooh Kala!
Pyaar Karna To Hai Janmo-janam Ka Sidhhaanth, Bahot Kum Hote Hain, Jo Nibhaate Hai Isey, Maran-o-paraanth!!
*~ S a h i l ~
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