Tero/Hannes, I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for your draft.
For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Draft: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mobike-design-08.txt This draft is ready to be published as an Informational RFC. ----------------------------------------------------------- NIT(s): ====== In the Introduction section, fourth paragraph, second sentence, there is a reference to "RFC2401bis [RFC4301]," that may be vestigial (RFC2401bis should probably be replaced with RFC4301). This should probably be handled as an RFC Editor note - provided that a change is needed. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
