I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-mcwalter-uri-mib-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2007-02-11 IETF LC End Date: 2007-03-08 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: Almost Ready Comments: as already signaled this document has a real issue with its title. I recommend to take a model, for instance RFC 2851. Some minor details: - ToC and 6, pages 2 and 6: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 2 page 3: the way STD 58 is referenced is inelegant (but it seems the issue is more in the STD 58 covering multiple RFCs...) - 6 page 6: perhaps to add the "editor" mention is the thing to do? - 7 pages 6 and 8: to cite the last I-D and status of RFCs is not the usage. Regards [EMAIL PROTECTED] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
