I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-multicast-encaps-07.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 25 Apr 2008 IESG Telechat date: 25 Apr 2008 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Some nits: - S3, second paragraph: s/If Ru and RD/If Ru and Rd/ - Same paragraph: you may want to consider terminating each numbered item except the last one with a comma. - S3, the numbered list towards the *end* of the section: You may want to consider terminating each numbered item with a period. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA) Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED],bell-labs.com,acm.org} WWW: http://www.alcatel-lucent.com/bell-labs _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
