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Document: draft-ietf-avt-rtcpssm-18
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2009-06-04
IETF LC End Date: 2009-06-05
IESG Telechat date: (not known)
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Proposes Standard
Major issues: none
Minor issues: Typos and some formatting
Line 843
provide a consistent behavior in the advancement if time (similar
Should be:
provide a consistent behavior in the advancement of time (similar
Line 1249
long as the those entities receiving and processing RTCP
Should be:
long as those entities receiving and processing RTCP
Line 1917:
eagerly change their own SSRC eagerly or unnecessarily.
Should be:
change their own SSRC unnecessarily.
Lines 2361-2362
attack or by mistake, e.g., an IP address configuration (e.g.,
typing) error, could directly create a denial of service attack
--- Need to rephrase the e.g.s
Lines 2738-2742:
the operation of RTP. For RTP-compliant receivers that do not
understand the unicast mechanisms, the RTCP traffic may still reach
the group, in the event that an ASM distribution network is used, in
which case there may be some duplication of traffic due to the
reflection channel, but this should be ignored. It is anticipated,
--- Sentence seems too long.
Section 16.4 - Needs a bit of formatting.
--Avshalom
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