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Document: draft-ietf-mext-aero-reqs-04.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Aug 20, 2009
IESG Telechat date: Unknown
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational.
This was a very interesting draft to read.
The draft has 0 major issues, 0 minor issues, and 2 Nits/Editorial
comments.
Nits/Editorial comments
1) What is the "Gatelink system"? There are at least two
instances of it in the draft. Any reference or a short
sentence describing this would help the reader not
verbose in this particular domain.
2) Missing closing bracket ')' in Section 2.1.1, third paragraph,
third line; i.e., should be "... in Appendix A.)"
Thanks,
- vijay
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Email: v...@{alcatel-lucent.com,bell-labs.com,acm.org}
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