[RESEND, forgot to CC the chairs ... sorry.] I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-mext-aero-reqs-04.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Aug 20, 2009 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational. This was a very interesting draft to read. The draft has 0 major issues, 0 minor issues, and 2 Nits/Editorial comments. Nits/Editorial comments 1) What is the "Gatelink system"? There are at least two instances of it in the draft. Any reference or a short sentence describing this would help the reader not verbose in this particular domain. 2) Missing closing bracket ')' in Section 2.1.1, third paragraph, third line; i.e., should be "... in Appendix A.)" Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60566 (USA) Email: v...@{alcatel-lucent.com,bell-labs.com,acm.org} Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art