(Oops, it seems I forgot to forward this)
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-mpls-gmpls-lsp-reroute-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2009-08-31
IETF LC End Date: 2009-08-31
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 8 page 12: Author's Addresses -> Authors' Addresses
- 1 page 3: i.e. -> i.e.,
- 2.1 page 4: please introduce the ERO (Explict Route Object) abbrev
(note the TLV abbrev is supposed to be common so doesn't need to be
introduced, cf
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt )
- 2.1 page 5: IF_IF -> IF_ID
- 2.2 page 6 and 2.3 page 6: conformant -> compliant
- 2.2 page 6: Re-routing -> re-routing
- 2.2 page 6: is note -> is not
Note: the usage of rerouting/re-routing is not very uniform...
Regards (and sorry for the delay)
francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
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