I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve
these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipsec-meth-05.txt
Reviewer: Sean Turner
Review Date: 2009-10-17
IETF LC End Date: N/A
IESG Telechat date: 2009-10-22
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication
Comments:
The NITS tool is complaining about 16 unused references and 10 obsolete
references. I'd also add that [FIPS.186-1.1998] isn't actually used as
a reference.
Nits:
Sec 4: r/in RFC 2119. RFC 2119/in [RFC2119]. [RFC2119]
Secs 8.1-11.3: r:/Topology /Topology:
Sec 8.1: r/If all packet are/If all packets are
Sec 8.1: r/format should reflect/format SHOULD reflect
Sec 10.1: r/Reporting Format/Reporting Format:
Sec 13.1: r/(timestamp_B).The/(timestamp_B). The
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