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Document: draft-igoe-secsh-suiteb-05.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.gar...@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2011-02-15
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-02-17
Summary: The draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC (with
nits).
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits: When I reviewed version -02 of this document, I posted three NITs.
Unfortunately none of them have been addressed, nor I've received any
comments justifying them. So allow me to post them again for
completeness. On the other hand, I reviewed the changes from version -02
until version -05 and I don't have any additional comments.
- The document lacks an IANA section. If there is no action for IANA, the
section should say that, e.g., including something like "This document
has no actions for IANA." The author should consider whether this
document requires an IANA action or not.
- The document seems to lack the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even
if it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords and a reference to RFC 2119 exists
in the Normative References section.
- There are a number of unused references, including: AEAD, RFC4250,
SSH-Auth, GCM.
Regards,
Miguel G.
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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