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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-mp-ldp-reqs-07.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2011-05-19
IETF LC End Date: 2011-05-26
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Historical RFC.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits:
- The document has a strange structure. In particular, Section 1 lists
the contributing authors, which usually are included at the end of the
document. I recommend you to take a look at the Instructions to Authors,
in particular look at Section 4, which describes the Sections in an RFC
and their order:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-editor/instructions2authors.txt
where the Contributors are listed in section 7a, i.e., right after the
main body of the document, and prior to Acknowledgments, Security
Considerations, and IANA Considerations. Notice that you document has the
Acknowledgments and Security Considerations reversed as well.
- Section 2.2, small typo
s/A LSP/An LSP
s/A LSR/An LSR
Regards,
Miguel G.
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Miguel A. Garcia
+34-91-339-3608
Ericsson Spain
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