Francis,

Thanks for the review...

On 7/22/2011 1:44 AM, Francis Dupont wrote:
Nits/editorial comments:
  - ToC page 4 and appendix F page 77: Acknowledgements ->  Acknowledgments

One of the joys of the diversity of the IETF is the diversity of writing conventions we tolerate. For the current document, I'm surprised we didn't wind up with some British spellings...

In any event, it turns out that both forms of the word are valid spellings.


  - Authors' Addresses page 78: please consider to add the zip code to
   all addresses in the USA?

Yes, that would be more considerate to provide.

d/
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  Dave Crocker
  Brandenburg InternetWorking
  bbiw.net
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