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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-tls-dtls-heartbeat-03.txt Reviewer: Mary Barnes Review Date: 28 Oct 2011 IETF LC Date: 18 Oct 2011 IESG Telechat Date: 3 Nov 2011 Summary: Ready with editorial comments Editorial: 1) Section 2 (1st P, last sentence). The following sentence needs some work (there's a missing noun before the SHOULD) - I suggest something like the following: OLD: If an endpoint has indicated peer_not_allowed_to_send and receives a HeartbeatRequest message SHOULD drop the message silently and MAY send an unexpected_message Alert message. NEW: If an endpoint that has indicated peer_not_allowed_to_send receives a HeartbeatRequest message, the endpoint SHOULD drop the message silently and MAY send an unexpected_message Alert message. 2) Section 3: Should the "has to be" in this sentence be a MUST? Whenever a HeartbeatRequest message is received, it has to be answered with a corresponding HeartbeatResponse message.
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