I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2012-07-03 IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-20 IESG Telechat date: 2012-07-05 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I have some last editorial comments. Major issues: -none Minor issues: -none Nits/editorial comments: -Consistency with RFC6325, [Page 18], below the table, "end station service disable bit" --missing dash--> "end-station service disable bit" -Consistency: Acronyms are usually spelled out, then followed by the acronym in parenthesis [when first used]. On few occasions this has been reversed, ex. check for: "EISS (Enhanced Internal Sublayer Service)", "DRB (Designated RBridge)" vs "Reverse Path Forwarding Check (RPFC)" -Informative References, Ref. [802], please if you get a chance verify again the date of this document :) I checked again on the version freely available at http://standards.ieee.org/about/get/802/802.html, it says "7 February, 2002". I could not find anything dated "8 March, 2002". Thanks, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
