Hi Donald, Thanks a lot. All good with me. Best Regards, Meral
> -----Original Message----- > From: Donald Eastlake [mailto:d3e...@gmail.com] > Sent: July-05-12 09:50 > To: Meral Shirazipour > Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct....@tools.ietf.org > Subject: Re: Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04 > > Hi Meral, > > On Tue, Jul 3, 2012 at 12:18 PM, Meral Shirazipour > <meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen- > ART, please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before > posting a new version of the draft. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04 > > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > > Review Date: 2012-07-03 > > IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-20 > > IESG Telechat date: 2012-07-05 > > > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I > have some last editorial comments. > > > > Major issues: > > -none > > > > Minor issues: > > -none > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > -Consistency with RFC6325, [Page 18], below the table, "end station > service disable bit" --missing dash--> "end-station service disable bit" > > OK. > > > -Consistency: Acronyms are usually spelled out, then followed by the > acronym in parenthesis [when first used]. On few occasions this has been > reversed, ex. check for: > > "EISS (Enhanced Internal Sublayer Service)", "DRB (Designated RBridge)" vs > "Reverse Path Forwarding Check (RPFC)" > > OK. I think acronym followed by spelling out in parenthesis is probably best > for uniform format. > > > -Informative References, Ref. [802], please if you get a chance verify > > again the date of this document :) I checked again on the version freely > available at http://standards.ieee.org/about/get/802/802.html, it says "7 > February, 2002". I could not find anything dated "8 March, 2002". > > IEEE 802 distributes a CD of all of its standards to all of its active > members (I > believe to all the voting members of all of its working > groups) each year in November. (Actually, they are physically handed out at > the November 802 plenary meeting but if you qualify you can pick it up at a > later meeting if you don't attend the November meeting or forget to pick it > up there.) Under separate cover, I will send to you the pdf for IEEE Std 802- > 2001 from the CD that was distributed to me in November 2011. It says 8 > March 2002 on the title page (and "Approved 6 December 2001" on the next > page). > > Thanks, > Donald > ============================= > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com > > > Thanks, > > Meral > > > > --- > > Meral Shirazipour > > Ericsson > > Research > > www.ericsson.com _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art