I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-dh-checks-04 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 5/13/13 IETF LC End Date: 5/20/13 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This document is Ready. It is clearly written and easy to follow, even for a non-expert in security. I appreciated the sections that describe the transition to implementations that support the update and the ones that describe behavior upon test failures - which are of value to implementers and operators. One minor issue related to the IANA registry may be only an issue of clarification. Major issues: Minor issues: The IANA Considerations Sections mention that Groups 27-30 have been recently defined in [I-D.merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool]. This is an Informational Reference which is somehow odd, because without this reference the IANA actions could not be completed. On the other hand making [I-D.merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool] Normative Reference would create a downref because the later is informational. I believe this is OK, because I see the document in RFC Editor Queue waiting for IANA actions, which may actually be exactly the ones described in this I-D, but a cleaner solution would have been not defining at all Groups 27-30 here. Nits/editorial comments: _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
