I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-storm-ipsec-ips-update-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2013-08-14 IETF LC End Date: 2013-08-19 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost ready Major issues: None Minor issues: - this is in fact a pure editorial concern but as it can have a big impact on not IETF expert readers I put it here: At the end of 3 page 9: use of IPsec v3 is recommended -> use of IPsec v3 is RECOMMENDED Two notes for the discussion: - a RFC 2119 keyword doesn't need to be capitalized - it is the only place with a preference for IPsec v3 over v2. Nits/editorial comments: - Authors' Addresses page 16 (twice): US -> USA Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
