I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-trill-oam-framework-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20131120 IETF LC End Date: 20131126 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 3 and 9 page 30: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1.1 page 5 (ECMP): Pathing -> Path - 2.1 page 6 and many other places: e.g. -> e.g., (and i.e. -> i.e., too... First at 2.4 page 12) - 2.6 page 12: ask the RFC Editor to manage to get the title not at the very end of the page - 6.1.5 and 6.1.6 page 26: in group item titles you put "/" and "," separators, for instance: - VLAN / Fine grain label / Flow parameters and - Target RBridge Nickname (unicast), Tree Identifier (Multicast) and IP multicast group Is there a good reason? And BTW the IP multicast group is for the multicast case. Note my comment is only about the wording: the spec is very easy to understand. - 6.1.7 page 27 (and 6.1.8 page 28): in Repeat Count "For proactive monitoring this may be set to allow for infinite monitoring." what is the recommended value to set the counter (or with other words how is encoded the infinite)? - 10.2 page 31 (TRILL-BFD): Interconnetion -> Interconnection (Note the spelling error is in the referenced I-D itself but it has at least one common author) Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr PS: my spell checker insists about congruency (the correct term is congruence) and IMHO it is right... _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
