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Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-evpn-req-06
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Jan-21-2014
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Jan-23-2014
Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 2
This document is ready for publication as an Informational.
The document is ready, most of the nits in the nit-list I had have
been addressed by the IESG during balloting. That said, the remaining
nits on my list are:
- The requirements in the Security Considerations section (R13 and R14)
are better put in Section 6 (Ease of Provisioning Requirements), no?
Is there something intrinsic to do with security on R13 and R14 that
they are put in the Security Considerations section? If there is, it
is not apparent to me.
- Grammar/language: Section 7, Requirement 9:
s/This gives rise to two/This results in two/
(Reason: "gives rise to" is probably best left to works of
fiction :-) )
Thanks,
- vijay
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