Document: draft-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09 Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty
Review Date: 1/31/14 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: (if known) 2/18/14 Summary: This draft extends RFC3954, but is specific to Cisco. There has already been discussion about this being a Cisco specific draft and involved consultation with the WG chair. For Gen-art, the document has a few editorial nits that should be resolved and other reviewers points on the Cisco specific document should be considered. Otherwise, the document is ready for publication. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Introduction: The third sentence is terminated with a question mark and it should be a period as it is not a question in itself. The last sentence in this paragraph correctly terminates with a question mark, but the space before it should be deleted.
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