Thanks for the response. I removed sections that do not seem to need further discusson.
> On Dec 15, 2014, at 4:32 PM, <philip.eard...@bt.com> <philip.eard...@bt.com> > wrote: > [...] > OLD > > o Understanding the quality experienced by customers. Alongside > benchmarking competitors, gaining better insight into the user's > service through a sample panel of the operator's own customers. > The ISP requires a performance viewpoint of the end-to-end > perspective, which includes: home/enterprise networks; peering > points; Content Delivery Networks (CDNs); etc. > > PROPOSED NEW > > o Understanding the quality experienced by customers. The network > operator would like to gain better insight into the end-to-end performance > experienced by its customers. This could incorporate home and enterprise > networks, and the impact of peering, caching and Content Delivery Networks > (CDNs). Looks good, but do you expect the last sentence to be exhaustive, or are those just examples? >>> - 3.1, 1st para: >>> >>> Can you provide a definition or reference for "mean opinion score"? >> >> Not addressed. > > If a reference is really needed, then i guess > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mean_opinion_score will do. > On a quick search, it looks like that's at least discussed (and maybe defined) in ITU-T P.800. http://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-P.800-199608-I/en [...] > >>> -- 4.2, 3rd paragraph: >>> Can you offer a definition for "probes"? >> Not addressed. > > I don't want to address this one. Formal terminology is in the LMAP > framework, including the definition of "measurement agent". In this document > we used the more informal term "probe", as it seems easy to understand > without a formal definition. Since this use cases doc might have a wider > readership, we wanted to avoid terminology and just give the reader the > motivations and usages of LMAP measurement information. Could you offer an informal definition, or a "such as [example]" sort of thing? "Probe" has many meanings. Context might be enough for some readers, but possibly not all. > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
