Hi Jari, Suresh,
Thank you for your suggestion. How about this, after each of the four uses of
“must immediately start” (in C3, C8, S3, and S6), we add the sentence:
It is unnecessary for the <protocol> [client/server] to wait
for the remote peer to initiate the <protocol> first.
Would this be helpful?
Thanks,
Kent
On 10/22/15, 9:05 AM, "Jari Arkko" <jari.ar...@piuha.net> wrote:
>Thanks for the explanation, Kent, and for the review, Suresh. Can the
>explanation be added to the document for other people who might have the same
>question.
>
>Jari
>
>On 21 Oct 2015, at 19:37, Kent Watsen <kwat...@juniper.net> wrote:
>
>>
>> Hi Suresh,
>>
>> Thank you for your review.
>>
>> To answer your question, the server can start the SSH server protocol
>> immediately. It does not have the wait for the client for anything. At
>> least, this is how my code works :)
>>
>> Thanks again,
>> Kent
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> On 10/21/15, 12:10 AM, "Suresh Krishnan" <suresh.krish...@ericsson.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
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>>>
>>> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
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>>>
>>> Document: draft-ietf-netconf-call-home-11.txt
>>> Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
>>> Review Date: 2015/10/20
>>> IESG Telechat date: 2015/10/22
>>>
>>> Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I do
>>> have a comment that you may wish to address.
>>>
>>> Minor
>>> =====
>>>
>>> * Section 3.1 S3: The server cannot immediately start the SSH server
>>> protocol
>>> without waiting for SSH connection initiation from the SSH client, right? If
>>> yes, shouldn't there be an additional condition here?
>>>
>>> Thanks
>>> Suresh
>>>
>>>
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