[+barry] I apologize to reply to myself, but I would be remiss to not mention that Barry Leiba had a related COMMENT on the "must immediately start” text. His suggestion is to remove the words “MUST immediately” (i.e. Just have “start”). As he writes: "What *else* might the client [server] do, which merits a MUST here?”
While I personally do think that it is “MUST immediately”, I think that the wording is still be accurate without it...and thus simply removing these two words provides an alternate way to resolve Suresh’s comment. Thoughts? Thanks, Kent On 10/22/15, 5:35 PM, "Kent Watsen" <kwat...@juniper.net> wrote: > >Hi Jari, Suresh, > >Thank you for your suggestion. How about this, after each of the four uses of >“must immediately start” (in C3, C8, S3, and S6), we add the sentence: > > It is unnecessary for the <protocol> [client/server] to wait > for the remote peer to initiate the <protocol> first. > >Would this be helpful? > >Thanks, >Kent > > > > > >On 10/22/15, 9:05 AM, "Jari Arkko" <jari.ar...@piuha.net> wrote: > >>Thanks for the explanation, Kent, and for the review, Suresh. Can the >>explanation be added to the document for other people who might have the same >>question. >> >>Jari >> >>On 21 Oct 2015, at 19:37, Kent Watsen <kwat...@juniper.net> wrote: >> >>> >>> Hi Suresh, >>> >>> Thank you for your review. >>> >>> To answer your question, the server can start the SSH server protocol >>> immediately. It does not have the wait for the client for anything. At >>> least, this is how my code works :) >>> >>> Thanks again, >>> Kent >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> On 10/21/15, 12:10 AM, "Suresh Krishnan" <suresh.krish...@ericsson.com> >>> wrote: >>> >>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >>>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >>>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >>>> >>>> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before >>>> posting a new version of the draft. >>>> >>>> Document: draft-ietf-netconf-call-home-11.txt >>>> Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan >>>> Review Date: 2015/10/20 >>>> IESG Telechat date: 2015/10/22 >>>> >>>> Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I do >>>> have a comment that you may wish to address. >>>> >>>> Minor >>>> ===== >>>> >>>> * Section 3.1 S3: The server cannot immediately start the SSH server >>>> protocol >>>> without waiting for SSH connection initiation from the SSH client, right? >>>> If >>>> yes, shouldn't there be an additional condition here? >>>> >>>> Thanks >>>> Suresh >>>> >>>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Gen-art mailing list >>> Gen-art@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >> _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
