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Document: draft-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Feb-26-2016
IETF LC End Date: Not known
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This document is ready as a BCP, however, it does have 1 Minor issue
that I detail below.
Major: 0
Minor: 1
Nits: 0
Minor:
- S1, "Other RAI working groups develop extensions to SIP that do not
change the core protocol, new applications of SIP, and other
technologies for interactive communication among humans."
Are we intentionally limiting interactive communications only to
"humans"? I would suspect that this would be limiting, no? A
bunch of SIP SUBS/NOTs happen between automaton, or machines.
Surely we don't want to exclude these in the future. My suggestion
would be to simply take out the phrase "among humans".
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Nokia Networks
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