Thanks much, Brian! Authors, do note Brian’s comments.
Jari On 24 Jun 2016, at 05:48, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-alto-deployments-15.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2016-06-13 > IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-21 > IESG Telechat date: 2016-06-30 > > Summary: Ready > -------- > > Comment: > -------- > > This is a long document but well written, so there is little to say about it. > > Minor issues: > ------------- > > The Conclusion section could be deleted. It doesn't add anything. > > There are a lot of Informational references that are still personal I-Ds. > Many of > them are not even listed as "Related Internet-Drafts" for the Alto WG. I > think readers > of the future RFC will find this a bit annoying. > > Nits: > ----- > > <jan.seed...@neclab.eu> and <martin.stiemerl...@neclab.eu> bounced > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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