Hi Paul, >> PR created: >> >> https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-dtls-sdp/pull/34 > >This leaves RFC5763 in an inconsistent state: >- the reference to 8122 in section 5 isn't backed up with an entry in the >references section
In the PR, I DO add 8122 to the reference section of 5763 :) >- there is still a reference to 4572 in the introduction. I could add a statement, saying that the reference in the Introduction is updated. Regards, Christer Otherwise looks right. Thanks, Paul > Regards, > > Christer > > -----Original Message----- > From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmb...@ericsson.com] > Sent: 29 July 2017 23:38 > To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu>; Ben Campbell > <b...@nostrum.com> > Cc: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp....@ietf.org; General Area Review Team > <gen-art@ietf.org>; IETF MMUSIC WG <mmu...@ietf.org> > Subject: RE: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of > draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27 > > Hi, > >>>>>> Regarding the reference to RFC 4572, the new text in section >>>>>> 10.2.1 references RFC 4572. We earlier agreed we were not going to >>>>>> update that text, and keep an informative reference to RFC 4572. >>>>> >>>>> OK, I guess I remember that now. Is it considered acceptable to >>>>> issue a new document with a reference to an obsolete document when it >>>>> isn't to highlight a difference from the current document? >>>>> >>>>> Since this is a review for the teleconference, I'll just leave that for >>>>> the IESG folk to decide. >>>> >>>> As far as I know, there’s no hard and fast rule about this. It >>>> really depends on whether the difference between the new and >>>> obsolete dependencies are material to the draft. I do think we (i.e. >>>> the IESG) would favor referencing the new RFC, but would be open to >>>> arguments about why a WG chose to reference the obsolete version >>>> >>>> Does anyone recall the reasoning in this instance? >>> >>> Just to make sure we are on the same page, there are TWO references to RFC >>> 4572 in the draft. >>> >>> The FIRST reference is in section 8, where it is used to reference >>> an example in RFC 4572. The same example exists in RFC 8122, so we can >>> change that reference. >>> >>> The SECOND reference is in section 10.2.1, as part of the updated >>> text for RFC 5763. Now, RFC 5763 references RFC 4572 in 4 difference >>> places, so if we change the >reference to RFC 8122 in the text >>> updated by the draft we would also have to do it in every other place. That >>> was the reason we decided not to do it (I have no problem doing it that's >>> what IESG wants, though). >> >> Thanks for pointing that out. I just looked at that to size up the >> situation. Of those four references, three of them are in section 5 >> and will all be replaced by the new text in this document. The remaining >> reference is simply a general one in the introduction. And then in addition >> there is the actual reference text in the normative references. >> >> ISTM that it would be sufficient to update the reference in the new >> text for section 5 and then add a general statement to update all references >> to 4572 to refer to 8122. >> >> But again, this is really an IESG issue at this point. > > Or, we could just go ahead and do it :) > > Regards, > > Christer > >> >> >> >>>> -----Original Message----- >>>> From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmb...@ericsson.com] >>>> Sent: 29 July 2017 01:07 >>>> To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu>; >>>> draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp....@ietf.org >>>> Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>; IETF MMUSIC WG >>>> <mmu...@ietf.org> >>>> Subject: RE: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of >>>> draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27 Hi Paul, Thanks for the review. I'll >>>> fix references. >>>> Regards, >>>> Christer >>>> -----Original Message----- >>>> From: Paul Kyzivat [mailto:pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu] >>>> Sent: 28 July 2017 04:01 >>>> To: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp....@ietf.org >>>> Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>; IETF MMUSIC WG >>>> <mmu...@ietf.org> >>>> Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of >>>> draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this >>>> draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents >>>> being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction >>>> from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the >>>> draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at >>>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >>>> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27 >>>> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat >>>> Review Date: 2017-07-07 >>>> IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-24 >>>> IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-15 >>>> Summary: >>>> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be >>>> fixed before publication. >>>> (These nits were reported by IdNits. I apologize for not noticing >>>> these during my Last Call review.) >>>> Issues: >>>> Major: 0 >>>> Minor: 0 >>>> Nits: 2 >>>> (1) NIT: Unused Reference: 'RFC5245' is defined on line 1065, but >>>> no explicit reference was found in the text This is now redundant because >>>> all the references in the text have been changed to >>>> draft-ietf-ice-rfc5245bis. >>>> (2) NIT: Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): >>>> RFC >>>> 4572 This is now obsolete because it has been replaced by RFC8122. This >>>> draft should now be referencing that. >>> >> > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art