Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-117 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2019-01-28 IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-27 IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07 Summary: Ready. There are a couple of trivial nits remaining. Otherwise, thanks very much for addressing my last call comments. Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: S3: The expansion of 3R needs to be at first occurrence. This is one paragraph earlier than the added expansion in v11. S3, next to last para: need to expand FEC. S4.1, para 5: s/to the allocation/used for the allocation/ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
