Elwyn, thanks for your reviews. Young, thank you for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Jan 29, 2019, at 8:02 PM, Leeyoung <leeyo...@huawei.com> wrote: > > Hi Elwyn, > > Thanks for further review and confirming the acceptance of the most of the > edits while pointing out a few items to be corrected. I will update those > during the IESG review. > > Best regards, > Young > > -----Original Message----- > From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:elw...@dial.pipex.com] > Sent: Monday, January 28, 2019 2:13 PM > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext....@ietf.org; p...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org > Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11 > > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-117 > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 2019-01-28 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-27 > IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07 > > Summary: > Ready. There are a couple of trivial nits remaining. Otherwise, thanks very > much for addressing my last call comments. > > Major issues: > None. > > Minor issues: > None. > > Nits/editorial comments: > S3: The expansion of 3R needs to be at first occurrence. This is one > paragraph earlier than the added expansion in v11. > > S3, next to last para: need to expand FEC. > > S4.1, para 5: s/to the allocation/used for the allocation/ > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
