From: Ace <ace-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Seitz Ludwig Sent: Sunday, December 22, 2019 11:52 PM To: 'elwynd' <elw...@folly.org.uk>; Ludwig Seitz <ludwig_se...@gmx.de>; Elwyn Davies <elw...@dial.pipex.com>; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: last-c...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params....@ietf.org; a...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Ace] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-06 Hello Elwyn, Sorry for being a pain. I have one more comment. /Ludwig (now finally from the corporate account) From: elwynd <elw...@folly.org.uk <mailto:elw...@folly.org.uk> > Sent: den 22 december 2019 19:27 To: Ludwig Seitz <ludwig_se...@gmx.de <mailto:ludwig_se...@gmx.de> >; Elwyn Davies <elw...@dial.pipex.com <mailto:elw...@dial.pipex.com> >; gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org> Cc: last-c...@ietf.org <mailto:last-c...@ietf.org> ; draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params....@ietf.org <mailto:draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params....@ietf.org> ; a...@ietf.org <mailto:a...@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-06 Hi, Ludwig. Having had another look at section 3.1 of draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession, technically the rules about which keys have to be present are not part of the syntax of the cnf claim. The point can be covered by changing '"syntax of the 'cnf' claim" to "syntax and semantics of the 'cnf' claim" in each case. [LS] Ok. Will do. However, the second look threw up another point: Figure 2 in s3.2 gives a Symetric key example - I think this should use an Encrypted_COSE_Key (or Encrypted_COSE_Key0) as described in section 3.3 of draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession. [LS] Figure 2 in 3.2 gives an example of a AS response to a client requesting an access token. As per the requirements from draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz, this communication MUST be confidentiality protected, therefore it is unnecessary to additionally encrypt the COSE_Key. The provisions in 3.3 of draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession are for access tokens in CWT format, containing a symmetric key, that are not encrypted themselves (i.e. only MAC:ed or signed). [JLS] I tend to agree with not doing the encryption in the example. The encryption is not required as protection could be done elsewhere and having an example that people can read increases the usability of the example. Jim Otherwise I think we are done. Eventually we will get to Christmas! [LS] I promise to leave it be over the holidays.
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