Hello Francesca: Many thanks for your review : )
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication. However, I noticed the > normative reference to an informative document, draft-ietf-lwig-6lowpan- > virtual-reassembly (ref. 'LWIG-VRB'), which is problematic, since this draft > is > on the standard track. Moved both this and the reference to recoverable frags to informational. They are just illustrative anyway. > > Major issues: - > > Minor issues: - > > Nits/editorial comments: > > * Last paragraph of Section 5, I suggest a minor reformulation for clarity. > > OLD: > An associated > caveat is that on a half duplex radio, if node A sends the next > fragment at the same time as node B forwards the previous fragment to > a node C down the path then node B will miss the next fragment. > NEW: > An associated > caveat is that on a half duplex radio, if node A sends the next > fragment at the same time as node B forwards the previous fragment to > a node C down the path then node B will miss the next fragment from node > A. > Applied, and published 09. Please let me know if we are all set now? Again, many thanks, Francesca! Pascal _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
