Roni, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.
Lars On 2021-4-2, at 10:58, Roni Even via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-?? > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date: 2021-04-02 > IETF LC End Date: None > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > This is an early review of the draft. I find the 04 version easy to understand > but have one comment > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > the last paragraph in the abstract , mostly the last sentence " RFC 4303 > remains the authoritative description." should be in my opinion in the main > body of the document and not only in the abstract. I also see some difference > between the document and RFC4303 > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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