nightmorph 06/05/26 19:29:27 Modified: gentoo-freebsd.xml Log: Minor grammar/spelling fixes for this update; no content change
Revision Changes Path 1.20 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml?rev=1.20&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml?rev=1.20&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml.diff?r1=1.19&r2=1.20&cvsroot=gentoo Index: gentoo-freebsd.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml,v retrieving revision 1.19 retrieving revision 1.20 diff -u -r1.19 -r1.20 --- gentoo-freebsd.xml 26 May 2006 19:21:37 -0000 1.19 +++ gentoo-freebsd.xml 26 May 2006 19:29:27 -0000 1.20 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml,v 1.19 2006/05/26 19:21:37 nightmorph Exp $ --> +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml,v 1.20 2006/05/26 19:29:27 nightmorph Exp $ --> <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> <guide link="/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml"> @@ -59,10 +59,11 @@ <body> <p> -<uri link="/proj/en/gentoo-alt/bsd/fbsd/">Gentoo/FreeBSD</uri> is a subproject of the -<uri link="/proj/en/gentoo-alt/">Gentoo/Alt project</uri>, with the goal of providing -a fully-capable FreeBSD operating system featuring the design sensibilities known from -Gentoo Linux, like the init system and the portage package management system. +<uri link="/proj/en/gentoo-alt/bsd/fbsd/">Gentoo/FreeBSD</uri> is a subproject +of the <uri link="/proj/en/gentoo-alt/">Gentoo/Alt project</uri>, with the +goal of providing a fully-capable FreeBSD operating system featuring design +sensibilities taken from Gentoo Linux, such as the init system and the Portage +package management system. </p> </body> @@ -294,7 +295,7 @@ If you want, you can now rebuild the system's core packages. </p> -<pre caption="Rebuilding the FreeBSD core packages (Optional)"> +<pre caption="Rebuilding the FreeBSD core packages (optional)"> # <i>emerge -e system</i> </pre> @@ -304,7 +305,7 @@ them in the following way: </p> -<pre caption="Geting the FreeBSD kernel sources"> +<pre caption="Getting the FreeBSD kernel sources"> # <i>emerge freebsd-sources</i> </pre> -- [email protected] mailing list
