nightmorph    07/04/04 14:22:46

  Modified:             gentoo-freebsd.xml
  Log:
  better english, no content change, bug 173315

Revision  Changes    Path
1.24                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml

file : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml?rev=1.24&view=markup
plain: 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml?rev=1.24&content-type=text/plain
diff : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml?r1=1.23&r2=1.24

Index: gentoo-freebsd.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.23
retrieving revision 1.24
diff -u -r1.23 -r1.24
--- gentoo-freebsd.xml  3 Jan 2007 03:08:25 -0000       1.23
+++ gentoo-freebsd.xml  4 Apr 2007 14:22:45 -0000       1.24
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml,v 1.23 
2007/01/03 03:08:25 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml,v 1.24 
2007/04/04 14:22:45 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/gentoo-freebsd.xml">
@@ -337,8 +337,8 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-After you got hold of the Gentoo/FreeBSD overlay, it's time to link
-<path>/etc/make.profile</path> to the correct profile and add get your
+After you obtain the Gentoo/FreeBSD overlay, it's time to link
+<path>/etc/make.profile</path> to the correct profile and get your
 <path>/etc/make.conf</path> ready for Gentoo/FreeBSD.
 </p>
 



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