nightmorph 09/01/26 07:51:05
Modified: hb-install-alpha-medium.xml
hb-install-bootconfig.xml
hb-install-hppa-medium.xml
hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml
hb-install-sparc-medium.xml
hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml
Log:
various readability fixes, bug 253058
Revision Changes Path
1.50 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml
file :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml?rev=1.50&view=markup
plain:
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml?rev=1.50&content-type=text/plain
diff :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml?r1=1.49&r2=1.50
Index: hb-install-alpha-medium.xml
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RCS file:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.49
retrieving revision 1.50
diff -u -r1.49 -r1.50
--- hb-install-alpha-medium.xml 5 Jun 2008 21:35:57 -0000 1.49
+++ hb-install-alpha-medium.xml 26 Jan 2009 07:51:05 -0000 1.50
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@
<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
-<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml,v
1.49 2008/06/05 21:35:57 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml,v
1.50 2009/01/26 07:51:05 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<sections>
-<version>9.2</version>
-<date>2008-06-05</date>
+<version>9.3</version>
+<date>2009-01-25</date>
<section>
<title>Hardware Requirements</title>
@@ -145,8 +145,7 @@
The Universal Installation CD is called
<c>install-alpha-universal-2008.0.iso</c>
and consumes about 316 MB on a CD. You can use this Installation CD to install
Gentoo, and you can even use it to install Gentoo without a working internet
-connection, just in case you want to bring Gentoo to another PC than the one
-you are currently installing Gentoo on :)
+connection.
</p>
<table>
1.3 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-bootconfig.xml
file :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-bootconfig.xml?rev=1.3&view=markup
plain:
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-bootconfig.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/plain
diff :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-bootconfig.xml?r1=1.2&r2=1.3
Index: hb-install-bootconfig.xml
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RCS file:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-bootconfig.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- hb-install-bootconfig.xml 22 Jun 2008 01:57:09 -0000 1.2
+++ hb-install-bootconfig.xml 26 Jan 2009 07:51:05 -0000 1.3
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-bootconfig.xml,v 1.2
2008/06/22 01:57:09 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-bootconfig.xml,v 1.3
2009/01/26 07:51:05 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<!DOCTYPE included SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
<included>
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
<body>
<p>
-If you want to view the Gentoo Handbook (either from-CD or online) during the
+If you want to view the Gentoo Handbook (either from the CD or online) during
the
installation, make sure you have created a user account (see <uri
link="#useraccounts">Optional: User Accounts</uri>). Then press <c>Alt-F2</c>
to
go to a new terminal and log in.
1.51 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml
file :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml?rev=1.51&view=markup
plain:
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml?rev=1.51&content-type=text/plain
diff :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml?r1=1.50&r2=1.51
Index: hb-install-hppa-medium.xml
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RCS file:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.50
retrieving revision 1.51
diff -u -r1.50 -r1.51
--- hb-install-hppa-medium.xml 13 Jan 2009 17:53:26 -0000 1.50
+++ hb-install-hppa-medium.xml 26 Jan 2009 07:51:05 -0000 1.51
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@
<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
-<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml,v
1.50 2009/01/13 17:53:26 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml,v
1.51 2009/01/26 07:51:05 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<sections>
-<version>9.2</version>
-<date>2009-01-13</date>
+<version>9.3</version>
+<date>2009-01-25</date>
<section>
<title>Hardware Requirements</title>
@@ -152,8 +152,7 @@
The Universal Installation CD is called
<c>install-hppa-universal-2008.0.iso</c>
and consumes about 339 MB on a CD. You can use this Installation CD to install
Gentoo, and you can even use it to install Gentoo without a working internet
-connection, just in case you want to bring Gentoo to another PC than the one
-you are currently installing Gentoo on :)
+connection.
</p>
<table>
1.39 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml
file :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml?rev=1.39&view=markup
plain:
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml?rev=1.39&content-type=text/plain
diff :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml?r1=1.38&r2=1.39
Index: hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml
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RCS file:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.38
retrieving revision 1.39
diff -u -r1.38 -r1.39
--- hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml 2 May 2008 08:04:23 -0000 1.38
+++ hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml 26 Jan 2009 07:51:05 -0000 1.39
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@
<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
-<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml,v
1.38 2008/05/02 08:04:23 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml,v
1.39 2009/01/26 07:51:05 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<sections>
-<version>9.1</version>
-<date>2008-05-02</date>
+<version>9.2</version>
+<date>2009-01-25</date>
<section>
<title>Hardware Requirements</title>
@@ -153,8 +153,7 @@
The Universal Installation CD is called
<c>install-ppc64-universal-2008.0.iso</c> and uses 460 MB. You can use
this Installation CD to install Gentoo, and you can even use it to install
-Gentoo without a working internet connection, just in case you want to bring
-Gentoo to another PC than the one you are currently installing Gentoo on :)
+Gentoo without a working internet connection.
</p>
<table>
1.48 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml
file :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml?rev=1.48&view=markup
plain:
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml?rev=1.48&content-type=text/plain
diff :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml?r1=1.47&r2=1.48
Index: hb-install-sparc-medium.xml
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RCS file:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.47
retrieving revision 1.48
diff -u -r1.47 -r1.48
--- hb-install-sparc-medium.xml 2 May 2008 08:04:23 -0000 1.47
+++ hb-install-sparc-medium.xml 26 Jan 2009 07:51:05 -0000 1.48
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@
<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
-<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml,v
1.47 2008/05/02 08:04:23 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-sparc-medium.xml,v
1.48 2009/01/26 07:51:05 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<sections>
-<version>9.1</version>
-<date>2008-05-02</date>
+<version>9.2</version>
+<date>2009-01-25</date>
<section>
<title>Hardware Requirements</title>
@@ -151,8 +151,7 @@
The Universal Installation CD is called
<c>install-sparc64-universal-2008.0.iso</c> and uses 295 MB. You can use this
Installation CD to install Gentoo, and you can even use it to install Gentoo
-without a working internet connection, just in case you want to bring Gentoo to
-another PC than the one you are currently installing Gentoo on :)
+without a working internet connection.
</p>
<table>
1.16 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml
file :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml?rev=1.16&view=markup
plain:
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml?rev=1.16&content-type=text/plain
diff :
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml?r1=1.15&r2=1.16
Index: hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml
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RCS file:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
--- hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml 2 May 2008 08:04:23 -0000 1.15
+++ hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml 26 Jan 2009 07:51:05 -0000 1.16
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
-<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml,v
1.15 2008/05/02 08:04:23 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header:
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-x86+amd64-medium.xml,v
1.16 2009/01/26 07:51:05 nightmorph Exp $ -->
<sections>
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@
Installer LiveCD is possible as well.
</abstract>
-<version>6.4</version>
-<date>2008-05-02</date>
+<version>6.5</version>
+<date>2009-01-25</date>
<section>
<title>Hardware Requirements</title>
@@ -194,8 +194,7 @@
The Installer LiveCD is called <c><keyval id="live-cd-name"/></c> and takes up
<keyval id="live-cd-size"/> MB. You can use this Installation CD to install
Gentoo, and you can even use it to install Gentoo without a working internet
-connection, just in case you want to bring Gentoo to another PC than the one
-you are currently installing Gentoo on.
+connection.
</p>
<table>
