nightmorph    09/01/26 07:51:06

  Modified:             hb-install-gli-medium.xml
  Log:
  various readability fixes, bug 253058

Revision  Changes    Path
1.8                  xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-gli-medium.xml

file : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-gli-medium.xml?rev=1.8&view=markup
plain: 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-gli-medium.xml?rev=1.8&content-type=text/plain
diff : 
http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-gli-medium.xml?r1=1.7&r2=1.8

Index: hb-install-gli-medium.xml
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RCS file: 
/var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-gli-medium.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- hb-install-gli-medium.xml   22 Jun 2008 01:57:10 -0000      1.7
+++ hb-install-gli-medium.xml   26 Jan 2009 07:51:06 -0000      1.8
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: 
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 1.7 2008/06/22 01:57:10 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: 
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 1.8 2009/01/26 07:51:06 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-If you want to view the Gentoo Handbook (either from-CD or online) during the
+If you want to view the Gentoo Handbook (either from the CD or online) during 
the
 installation, you can view it with Mozilla Firefox (from the graphical
 environment) or with <c>links</c> (from a terminal environment).
 </p>




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