Sure thing.  I made some further edits.  I admit that I'm not that familiar 
with the functionality in question, so I could only rephrase things and tighten 
up the text.  Please take a look; hopefully I made things better instead of 
worse.

Thanks,
Mike Pumphrey
OpenGeo - http://opengeo.org

On 5/14/2010 11:37 AM, Andrea Aime wrote:
> christian.muel...@nvoe.at ha scritto:
>> Added some text to both drafts, a short review please.
>
> I made some light editing. A native english speaker could sure improve
> it further (Mike, do you have a minute? :-p )
>
> Cheers
> Andrea
>
>

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