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Change subject: TRXD: add documentation for TRXDv2 protocol
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Patch Set 4:

(2 comments)

https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/22867/4/common/chapters/trx_if.adoc
File common/chapters/trx_if.adoc:

https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/22867/4/common/chapters/trx_if.adoc@738
PS4, Line 738: different with
different from what? I think something like "the ordering of TRXN within the 
PDUs of one batch is not  required to be ascending/monotonic" or something like 
that.  But "different" can only be used if you specify from what it is 
different.  You could also state "The orddering of [TRXN in the] PDUs may be 
different from the example below."


https://gerrit.osmocom.org/c/osmo-gsm-manuals/+/22867/4/common/chapters/trx_if.adoc@742
PS4, Line 742: packet
as UDP may at least in theory be fragmented over multiple packets, I suggest to 
use "datagram" which is (AFAIR) the terminology used in UDP.

We of course want no fragmentation for performance reason, but we should still 
try to use language as precise as possible.



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