milancermak opened a new pull request #12953: URL: https://github.com/apache/beam/pull/12953
While going through the programming guide, I found two small things that can be improved. First is in the [Windowing with bounded PCollections](https://beam.apache.org/documentation/programming-guide/#windowing-bounded-collections) section. The description mentions reading using `TextIO` but the images display reading from a database table via Kafka IO. I've updated both diagrams (there's also a slight change in the text) to better reflect the content in the section. Here's the "unwindowed" before & after: <img width="1170" alt="unwindowed-before" src="https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/184055/94370803-9f964880-00e1-11eb-893c-1517f07cfe5e.png"> <img width="1176" alt="unwindowed-after" src="https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/184055/94370806-a329cf80-00e1-11eb-8b5f-0f3c2ba9d193.png"> Here's the "windowing" before & after: <img width="1185" alt="windowing-before" src="https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/184055/94370822-be94da80-00e1-11eb-8e93-95f44ca93afb.png"> <img width="1193" alt="windowing-after" src="https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/184055/94370828-c05e9e00-00e1-11eb-99b8-ffbe1febf70b.png"> The second change is a minor one in the [Setting a trigger](https://beam.apache.org/documentation/programming-guide/#setting-a-trigger) section. The python example uses a code snippet from a test suite, but it is wrong with regards to the text - the text (and the Java snippet) use a one minute `afterProcessing` trigger whereas the incorrect snippet uses a 10 minute trigget (`10 * 60`). I've copy-pasted the whole code snippet and removed the now obsolete commands from the test suite. ------------------------ Thank you for your contribution! Follow this checklist to help us incorporate your contribution quickly and easily: - [x] [**Choose reviewer(s)**](https://beam.apache.org/contribute/#make-your-change) and mention them in a comment (`R: @username`). - [ ] Format the pull request title like `[BEAM-XXX] Fixes bug in ApproximateQuantiles`, where you replace `BEAM-XXX` with the appropriate JIRA issue, if applicable. 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