Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-grow-03-00: No Objection

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Two editorial things:

   GROW will also advise various working groups, mainly IDR and SIDROPS,
   with respect to whether it is addressing the relevant operational and
   routing security requirements of Internet-connected networks, and where
   appropriate, suggest course corrections.

The antecedent to "it" appears to be "GROW", but I think it's supposed to refer
to those various working groups.  Maybe "it" should be "they"?  (Also,
super-nit, there should be an additional comma before "where appropriate".)

And there appears to be some bad punctuation problems in the "goals" paragraph
-- missing periods, at least.



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