Hi Jouni, Thanks for the review. We appreciate your thoughtful comments and suggestions.
Since this document does not alter the TLV definitions specified in RFC 7854, the reference to updating RFC 7854 was removed in version-07 after discussions and reviews with the WG and AD. We have now submitted Version 13 for your review. Link: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats/13/ Diff: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-12&url2=draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-13&difftype=--html Kindly let us know if you have any further comments or suggestions. Thanks, Changwang 发件人: Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <[email protected]> 发送时间: 2025年10月27日 1:22 收件人: [email protected] 抄送: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] 主题: draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-12 ietf last call Genart review Document: draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats Title: Advanced BGP Monitoring Protocol (BMP) Statistics Types Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-grow-bmp-bgp-rib-stats-12 Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen Review Date: 2025-10-26 IETF LC End Date: 2025-10-24 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: My reading of the draft is that it is ready. I cannot claim prior experience with BMP (and had to read few supporting RFCs to understand the context a bit better), thus I may have missed some corners in the current draft. Major issues: None. Minor issues: Some of the new Stat Types, like 18, 19 and 22 sound like they were updating RFC7854. Should this be reflected? I did see older versions of the draft actually had the "updates" statement, but it has been removed since -07. Any particular reason for that? Nits/editorial comments: None. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 本邮件及其附件含有新华三集团的保密信息,仅限于发送给上面地址中列出 的个人或群组。禁止任何其他人以任何形式使用(包括但不限于全部或部分地泄露、复制、 或散发)本邮件中的信息。如果您错收了本邮件,请您立即电话或邮件通知发件人并删除本 邮件! This e-mail and its attachments contain confidential information from New H3C, which is intended only for the person or entity whose address is listed above. Any use of the information contained herein in any way (including, but not limited to, total or partial disclosure, reproduction, or dissemination) by persons other than the intended recipient(s) is prohibited. If you receive this e-mail in error, please notify the sender by phone or email immediately and delete it! _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
