Hi Paul, Thanks a lot for your quick review and confirmation. Best Regards, Paul
2022년 4월 20일 (수) 오전 11:47, Paul Wouters <[email protected]>님이 작성: > On Wed, 20 Apr 2022, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong wrote: > > > Hi Paul, > > Thanks for your review. > > I have submitted the revised draft reflecting your comments and > questions: > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-18 > > > > There are my answers to your comments and questions inline below. > > Thanks. Your changes and answers addressed my concerns. I've changed my > ballot to NO OBJECTION. > > Paul > > > On Wed, Apr 20, 2022 at 12:25 AM Paul Wouters <[email protected]> wrote: > > On Tue, 19 Apr 2022, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong wrote: > > > > > 2. I2NSF Monitoring Interface YANG Data Model > > > - > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model/ > > > - Paul Wouters is holding Ben Kaduk's DISCUSS position, and > needs to check whether my revision satisfies Ben's DISCUSS or not. > > > - This draft has gotten 9 supporting ballots (Yes or No > Objection). > > > > Yes it addresses most of the DISCUSS items. I am about to change > it but > > I have one question left: > > > > Section 6.7.1 had comments about firewall rule counters and > properties, > > and the document change just removed the listed properties. I am a > > little confused how this addresses Ben's point. How do people know > which > > properties are defined ? > > > > => [PAUL] As mentioned in page 3 in the revision letter, the > information (including > > src-ip, dst-ip, src-port, dst-port, protocol, and app) in Section > 6.7.1 was > > included by mistake, since this information is not included in the > YANG data > > model. The purpose of the firewall counter is to show what a > security policy > > in the firewall has done. Thus, we removed the unnecessary fields > from > > Section 6.7.1 and updated the description. > > > > > > Some review comments: > > > > The QUIC traffic should not be treated as UDP traffic > > > > You probably mean to say "treated as generic UDP traffic". It _is_ > still > > UDP traffic after all. > > > > => [PAUL] You are right. I have updated the sentence according to your > comments as follows: > > "The QUIC traffic should not be treated as generic UDP traffic and > > will be considered in the future I2NSF documents." > > > > The cookies information needs to be kept confidential and > > is not RECOMMENDED to be included in the monitoring data > unless > > the information is absolutely necessary to help to enhance > the > > security of the network. > > > > I am not sure why this header is specifically treated compared to > other > > HTTP headers. Please write "NOT RECOMMENDED" (eg uppercase the > 'not'). > > This text does address Ben's DISCUSS. > > > > => [PAUL] This is because cookies contain the information to degrade > security and privacy > > as mentioned in RFC 6265 (HTTP State Management Mechanism). > > I have updated the text about the HTTP Cookies header in Section > 6.3.4 as follows: > > "o cookies: The HTTP Cookie header field of the request from the > user agent. > > Note that though cookies have many historical infelicities that > degrade > > security and privacy, the Cookie and Set-Cookie header fields are > widely used > > on the Internet [RFC6265]. Thus, the cookies information needs to > be kept > > confidential and is NOT RECOMMENDED to be included in the > monitoring data > > unless the information is absolutely necessary to help to enhance > the > > security of the network. > > > > Thanks. > > > > Best Regards, > > Paul > > > > > > > 3. I2NSF NSF-Facing Interface YANG Data Model > > > - > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm/ > > > - This draft has gotten 9 supporting ballots (Yes or No > Objection) and Éric Vyncke changed his DISCUSS to ABSTAIN. > > > - This draft needs another review of one among the IESG ADs with > No Record. > > > > I will cast my ballot for this one later today after I've had a > change > > to review it. > > > > Paul > > > > > > > -- =========================== Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. Associate Professor Department Head Department of Computer Science and Engineering Sungkyunkwan University Office: +82-31-299-4957 Email: [email protected], [email protected] Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
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