Hi Qin, Thanks for your detailed review on I2NSF Registration Interface Draft. I will revise the draft with your valuable comments and let you review the revision.
Thanks. Best Regards, Paul 2022년 8월 24일 (수) 오후 6:42, Qin Wu <[email protected]>님이 작성: > Hi, Paul: > > Thank you for inviting me to review this draft. > > I am a little confused about the relation of this draft with > draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model > > See quoted text in draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model > > “ > > This document provides an information model and the corresponding > > YANG data model [RFC6020][RFC7950] that defines the capabilities of > > NSFs to centrally manage the capabilities of those NSFs. The NSFs > > can register their own capabilities into a Network Operator > > Management (Mgmt) System (i.e., Security Controller) with this YANG > > data model through the registration interface [RFC8329]. > > > > ” > > And quote text in draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-dm > > “ > > This document describes an information model (see Section 4) and a > > YANG [RFC7950] data model (see Section 5) for the I2NSF Registration > > Interface [RFC8329] between the security controller and the > > developer's management system (DMS) to support NSF capability > > registration and query via the registration interface. > > > > ” > > I am wondering which YANG data model is exchanged in the registration > interface. > > Shouldn’t YANG data model defined in draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-dm > augment the YANG model defined in > > draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model. > > > > In addition, I think registration interface seems not mandatory interface, > security controller in some other case can > > Learn capability NFV orchestrators, or NSF can expose dynamic capability > to security controller. > > > > Besides register NSF, I am wondering what other data or information can be > registered? I assume there are a lot. > > Therefore I would suggest to limit the scope of this registration > interface, only focus NSF capability registration. > > The title should reflect this. > > > > *For data model and information model definition, I think you should refer > to RFC3444.* > > For NSF access information, I am wondering whether management protocol > should also be part of access information. > > Regarding performance capability, I assume it is related to software or > hardware, or firmware specification, > > Naming it as performance capability seems confusing to me. > > > > -Qin > > ---------- 전달된 메일 ---------- > 보낸사람: *Linda Dunbar* <[email protected]> > 날짜: 2022년 6월 11일 (토) 오전 3:13 > 제목: [I2nsf] WGLC for draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-dm-17 > 받는사람: [email protected] <[email protected]> > > > > Hello Working Group, > > > > Many thanks to the authors of draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-dm-17 to > address all the comments from YANG Doctor review, SecDir review and OpsDIR > review. > > > > This email starts a three weeks Working Group Last Call > on draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-dm-17 > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-registration-interface-dm/ > > > > This poll runs until July 1, 2021. > > > > We are also polling for knowledge of any undisclosed IPR that applies to > this Document, to ensure that IPR has been disclosed in compliance with > IETF IPR rules (see RFCs 3979, 4879, 3669 and 5378 for more details). > > If you are listed as an Author or a Contributor of this Document, please > respond to this email and indicate whether or not you are aware of any > relevant undisclosed IPR. The Document won't progress without answers from > all the Authors and Contributors. > > > > If you are not listed as an Author or a Contributor, then please > explicitly respond only if you are aware of any IPR that has not yet been > disclosed in conformance with IETF rules. > > > > Thank you. > > > > Linda > > > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf > > -- > > =========================== > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. > Associate Professor > > Department Head > Department of Computer Science and Engineering > Sungkyunkwan University > Office: +82-31-299-4957 > Email: [email protected], [email protected] > Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> > -- =========================== Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. Associate Professor Department Head Department of Computer Science and Engineering Sungkyunkwan University Office: +82-31-299-4957 Email: [email protected], [email protected] Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
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