> Let me explain why I'm planning to include this sub-section.

Why?  Your explanation lacks substance, and further effort here is a
waste of time.

The document as it stands is just fine, except for one sentence that
needs rewording to make sense in English:

OLD
All IONs were republished whether as IESG statements, Web Pages, or
were discarded.

NEW
All IONs were republished as IESG statements, republished as Web Pages,
or discarded.


The document says everything it needs to say.  Let's publish it as it
is, and not spend more time trying to argue or explain anything.

Barry
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