Oh gak begitu. Seperti nulis posting biasa di forum aja. Tapi yang boleh posting hanya 2 orang yang bertanding. Ada jury nya misalnya 2-3 orang. Sisanya hanya boleh membaca secara pasif atau membuat thread sendiri untuk membahas game nya.
Ini gue kasih contoh deh ya (gue copy paste aja dari Antei Combat Center karena arena nya tertutup untuk member clan aja) Ini pertandingan antara: 2 orang JH (Jedi Hunter - rank ke 7, diatas Guardian) Note: Singkatan2 seperti AA, TE, CTR itu adalah jenis jurus yang digunakan. Misalnya TE = Telekinesis (mempergunakan Force) CTR = Contortion (mempergunakan fleksibilitas tubuh untuk escape dari confinement) Ini contoh round pertama antara JH Draco Maligo VS JH Dock Alfar JH Maligo: Guardian Draco Maligo paced slowly down the street. He breathed in the gloom that hung over the Force like a pall, a situation common enough for battlefields. Even nature mourned the dead, with its cloudy skies and incessant rain, as if trying to wash away the blood and carnage. The only sounds were from the pelting rain and the crunch of his boots on the broken paving stones, with an occasional rumble of thunder. He spotted his prey, Alfar walking towards him. Maligo stripped off his waterlogged robe and let it drop to the ground. The two foes stood a few meters apart and pulled out their Sith swords. Draco sprinted in and brought his sword crashing down at Alfar's head, using the Force to gird his muscles [PRW]. The Jedi Hunter blocked easily and the battle was joined. The flight leader let his younger opponent attack. The Tarenan stayed on the defensive, his feet apart, knees bent. He blocked vicious strike after slashing sweep, slapping the young Arconan's blade away then riposting with lightning slices that drew blood, but caused superficial damage. The clang of the swords echoed off the stone of the broken buildings adding to the sonic dissonance of Szarfin City. Maligo quickly overextended himself. Alfar kicked the Guardian in the chest and sliced an ear as Draco careened to the ground while jackknifing sideways [CTR] to avoid decapitation. Maligo quickly rolled over and pushed himself up onto his feet. He brought his sword up in a defensive manner to give himself a moment to think and to use the Force to slow the flow of blood oozing from his many cuts [AH]. Though not fatal by themselves, the eventual loss of blood would be. Might be, actually, if Alfar didn't kill him outright. The Guardian used the Force to hurl a stone shard at the Jedi Hunter [TE], who slapped it away with his blade [AA]. Maligo dashed in while his foe was distracted and whipped his sword at the right arm of his foe. Durasteel sliced through flesh and Dock's sword dropped from his shocked hand. Alfar pushed out with the Force [TE], which caused Maligo to stumble back only a couple of steps, but it was enough. The Corellian reached out with his left hand and called the sword back to him [TE], just in time to block another stab from the aggressive Almanian. Balasan dari JH Alfar: The attack aimed at Dock's head from the aggressive guardian was blocked just in time by the sith sword willed into its owner's hand. Dock pushed his enemy's sword away from him, and raised his sword over his head to attack while favoring his injured arm. When the hunter saw his foe prepare for the imminent attack, Dock spun around, and lashed out with a kick at the unseasoned guardian. The kick struck home, and Draco's feet fell out from under him, landing him heavy on the ground. While his opponent recovered from the fall, Dock fell back a few paces, and concentrated on the slash on his arm. He soon felt the itch of healing [AH]. While he channeled the force, Dock took a quick moment to look around at the venue he had noticed Draco scrutinizing earlier. The battlefield stank of death. The linger of spirits was almost palpable. As he was observing, Dock felt the oscillations of air, and the audible hiss of a razor whizzing past his head. He quickly looked back at the other combatant whose arm was in the post throw position. With a feel of luck that comes with near death, Dock took one of his hidden shurikens and returned the volley. The difference was in experience. The locust knife succeeded in hitting its target. Draco looked down at the knife stuck in his arm, his right arm, and shuddered a little. "Practice makes perfect, ye of worse aim," Dock mused as he watched his opponent unsheathe the small knife from his arm, and then throw it to the side. Draco did not find this funny, and sheathed his sword. Using his weak hand to unsheathe, and his right to throw, Draco unleashed a volley of 4 razors. Dock raised his sword, and knocked the first one to the left. Then using the little momentum of the razor, spun around and hit the second one with the palm of his hand, leaving a small trail of blood on his palm. The third razor missed its target because the target had rolled out of the way. The final razor bounced off the invisible wall conjured by Dock's upheld hand [TE]. Not wanting to waste any more knifes for the time being, Dock rushed towards his enemy, sword raised. End of round one. Nilai dari Jury: Draco Good description of both the action and environment, no major flaws Dock Aside from spacing and some spelling errors, there's a problem when you wrote in that you had a locust knife hit Draco in his right arm. You didn't notate any attempt to heal it but rather he simply pulled it out from his arm and used that same arm to hurl throwing razors at you which is not very likely. Demikian seterusnya sampai round yang disepakati. Dan Jury akan memilih siapa pemenangnya. Note: Yang dinilai bukan hanya jurus, tapi grammar, spelling, dan logic dari scene nya itu apakah masuk akal atau flawed. Mudah2 an gak bosen bacanya. Buat gue sih ini selain sebuah karya tulisan yang sangat imaginatif juga seru banget. Text game seperti ini sih sudah umum buat orang luar tapi di Indonesia gak ada sama sekali. Padahal kalau dibuat pakai bahasa Indonesia gue yakin gak kalah seru sih. Masalahnya dibutuhkan management dan organisasi serta dana yang cukup besar untuk mengelola website seperti ini. Dan orang Indonesia kalau gak mendatangkan untung dan hanya sekedar hobby biasa nya gak mau keluar duit banyak apalagi usaha banyak. ha ha ha... Udah ah... so, in your opinion susahan mana text game atau virtual game? Salam, Indie --- In [email protected], "Erianto Rachman" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Wah Ind, > > > > Apakah sama dengan game yang barusan di rekomen oleh Ivan? > > > > Di game "ourplace" ini, gw seperti main tamagochi. Ga ada pause-nya. > Karekter gw sekarang dalam kondisi kelaperan dan haus. hehehe >
