'ndie
kl maennya jenis gini, org2 di indo mgk lebih familiar dengan cerita2
koo pinghoo atau cerita silat (kapak geni 212 ...hehehehe)
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kl indie mau coba yg di telnet ourplace.org 6543....mgk ini lebih
sederhana karena environment atau 'world'
sudah dibuat..jadi jgn aneh...entar bisa ketemu luke skywalker dan kl
udah cukup level..bahkan bisa challenged
immortal..
dulu sewaktu level 150, pernah lawan immortal...(tapi immortalnya
mengalah)..hehehe...
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yg asik kl perang antara clan satu dengan yg laen...atau terjebak di
satu area maha sulit, di mana perlu pasukan
khusus utk menyelamatkan si orang ini...
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well,, text based itu emang asik....
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From: [email protected]
[mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of warbird692001
Sent: 22. lokakuuta 2007 13:13
To: [email protected]
Subject: [Indo-StarTrek] Re: RPG - (OOT)
Oh gak begitu.
Seperti nulis posting biasa di forum aja. Tapi yang boleh
posting
hanya 2 orang yang bertanding.
Ada jury nya misalnya 2-3 orang. Sisanya hanya boleh membaca
secara
pasif atau membuat thread sendiri untuk membahas game nya.
Ini gue kasih contoh deh ya (gue copy paste aja dari Antei
Combat
Center karena arena nya tertutup untuk member clan aja)
Ini pertandingan antara: 2 orang JH (Jedi Hunter - rank ke 7,
diatas
Guardian)
Note: Singkatan2 seperti AA, TE, CTR itu adalah jenis jurus yang
digunakan. Misalnya
TE = Telekinesis (mempergunakan Force)
CTR = Contortion (mempergunakan fleksibilitas tubuh untuk escape
dari
confinement)
Ini contoh round pertama antara JH Draco Maligo VS JH Dock Alfar
JH Maligo:
Guardian Draco Maligo paced slowly down the street. He breathed
in the
gloom that hung over the Force like a pall, a situation common
enough
for battlefields. Even nature mourned the dead, with its cloudy
skies
and incessant rain, as if trying to wash away the blood and
carnage.
The only sounds were from the pelting rain and the crunch of his
boots
on the broken paving stones, with an occasional rumble of
thunder. He
spotted his prey, Alfar walking towards him. Maligo stripped off
his
waterlogged robe and let it drop to the ground. The two foes
stood a
few meters apart and pulled out their Sith swords.
Draco sprinted in and brought his sword crashing down at Alfar's
head,
using the Force to gird his muscles [PRW]. The Jedi Hunter
blocked
easily and the battle was joined. The flight leader let his
younger
opponent attack. The Tarenan stayed on the defensive, his feet
apart,
knees bent. He blocked vicious strike after slashing sweep,
slapping
the young Arconan's blade away then riposting with lightning
slices
that drew blood, but caused superficial damage. The clang of the
swords echoed off the stone of the broken buildings adding to
the
sonic dissonance of Szarfin City.
Maligo quickly overextended himself. Alfar kicked the Guardian
in the
chest and sliced an ear as Draco careened to the ground while
jackknifing sideways [CTR] to avoid decapitation. Maligo quickly
rolled over and pushed himself up onto his feet. He brought his
sword
up in a defensive manner to give himself a moment to think and
to use
the Force to slow the flow of blood oozing from his many cuts
[AH].
Though not fatal by themselves, the eventual loss of blood would
be.
Might be, actually, if Alfar didn't kill him outright.
The Guardian used the Force to hurl a stone shard at the Jedi
Hunter
[TE], who slapped it away with his blade [AA]. Maligo dashed in
while
his foe was distracted and whipped his sword at the right arm of
his
foe. Durasteel sliced through flesh and Dock's sword dropped
from his
shocked hand. Alfar pushed out with the Force [TE], which caused
Maligo to stumble back only a couple of steps, but it was
enough. The
Corellian reached out with his left hand and called the sword
back to
him [TE], just in time to block another stab from the aggressive
Almanian.
Balasan dari JH Alfar:
The attack aimed at Dock's head from the aggressive guardian was
blocked just in time by the sith sword willed into its owner's
hand.
Dock pushed his enemy's sword away from him, and raised his
sword over
his head to attack while favoring his injured arm. When the
hunter saw
his foe prepare for the imminent attack, Dock spun around, and
lashed
out with a kick at the unseasoned guardian. The kick struck
home, and
Draco's feet fell out from under him, landing him heavy on the
ground.
While his opponent recovered from the fall, Dock fell back a few
paces, and concentrated on the slash on his arm. He soon felt
the itch
of healing [AH].
While he channeled the force, Dock took a quick moment to look
around
at the venue he had noticed Draco scrutinizing earlier. The
battlefield stank of death. The linger of spirits was almost
palpable.
As he was observing, Dock felt the oscillations of air, and the
audible hiss of a razor whizzing past his head. He quickly
looked back
at the other combatant whose arm was in the post throw position.
With a feel of luck that comes with near death, Dock took one of
his
hidden shurikens and returned the volley. The difference was in
experience. The locust knife succeeded in hitting its target.
Draco
looked down at the knife stuck in his arm, his right arm, and
shuddered a little.
"Practice makes perfect, ye of worse aim," Dock mused as he
watched
his opponent unsheathe the small knife from his arm, and then
throw it
to the side. Draco did not find this funny, and sheathed his
sword.
Using his weak hand to unsheathe, and his right to throw, Draco
unleashed a volley of 4 razors. Dock raised his sword, and
knocked the
first one to the left. Then using the little momentum of the
razor,
spun around and hit the second one with the palm of his hand,
leaving
a small trail of blood on his palm. The third razor missed its
target
because the target had rolled out of the way. The final razor
bounced
off the invisible wall conjured by Dock's upheld hand [TE].
Not wanting to waste any more knifes for the time being, Dock
rushed
towards his enemy, sword raised.
End of round one.
Nilai dari Jury:
Draco - Good description of both the action and environment, no
major
flaws
Dock - Aside from spacing and some spelling errors, there's a
problem
when you wrote in that you had a locust knife hit Draco in his
right
arm. You didn't notate any attempt to heal it but rather he
simply
pulled it out from his arm and used that same arm to hurl
throwing
razors at you which is not very likely.
Demikian seterusnya sampai round yang disepakati. Dan Jury akan
memilih siapa pemenangnya.
Note: Yang dinilai bukan hanya jurus, tapi grammar, spelling,
dan
logic dari scene nya itu apakah masuk akal atau flawed.
Mudah2 an gak bosen bacanya. Buat gue sih ini selain sebuah
karya
tulisan yang sangat imaginatif juga seru banget. Text game
seperti ini
sih sudah umum buat orang luar tapi di Indonesia gak ada sama
sekali.
Padahal kalau dibuat pakai bahasa Indonesia gue yakin gak kalah
seru
sih. Masalahnya dibutuhkan management dan organisasi serta dana
yang
cukup besar untuk mengelola website seperti ini. Dan orang
Indonesia
kalau gak mendatangkan untung dan hanya sekedar hobby biasa nya
gak
mau keluar duit banyak apalagi usaha banyak. ha ha ha...
Udah ah... so, in your opinion susahan mana text game atau
virtual game?
Salam,
Indie
--- In [email protected]
<mailto:indo-startrek%40yahoogroups.com> , "Erianto Rachman"
<[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
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> Wah Ind,
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>
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> Apakah sama dengan game yang barusan di rekomen oleh Ivan?
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> Di game "ourplace" ini, gw seperti main tamagochi. Ga ada
pause-nya.
> Karekter gw sekarang dalam kondisi kelaperan dan haus. hehehe
>
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