I have read this document, and I think it is getting ready. I have
some nits for it, but they are just typos and similar.

Nits:
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In appendix A:

   The attacker could infrequently emit forged but looking valid fragments
                                                   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
s/looking valid/valid looking/

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   ... that allows receiver to determine forgeg fragments and
                                         ^^^^^^
   not to fetch them into the reassempling queue.
          ^^^^^

s/forgeg/forged/
s/fetch/store/
-- 
kivi...@iki.fi

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